thank you.. although there were still some lumpy issues I had with this one. The latter version I preferred after I finally got a chance to read the text. Makes all the difference in the world; context.
This is one cool pic.
i have done some of Isabelle in fighting uniform and also clary in her party outfit and casual clothing. a friend and i have done a free hand pen sketch of isabelle and i have also done a free hand pen sketch of alec. take a look and leave a comment.
I really like how you did the swords and the background. Actually, I just overall really like it! I love Jace! He's such a cool character. I'm really excited for City of Ashes and City of Glass to come out.
I don't consider myself well versed in the lore of The Mortal Instruments Trilogy, I do recall it being mentioned that the city they all call home and originated from was somewhere in the South of France.
That being said I don't feel that there way of speech reflects that all too much, on account of me knowing too many Manhattan bound teens who are far more eloquent than they have any right to being. This having everything to do with the metropolitan-pseudo-intellectual scene most people fall into without even know, myself being one of them.
...My dear, this is not an end, but only the beginning :enter ominous musics:
His kind of costuming probably makes it almost impossible for him to appear terrifically slender without it looking improbable (too large for him to find it at all manageable while fighting) or the rest of him appearing a bit too gaunt (would a stick be wielding any sort of weapon effectively? - and so on).
I hope - if you've made any changes recently - you're having luck with it.